Okay, I changed you're to your in the excerpt. Those of you who know me know that it's a miracle that I can spell my own name...

So, keep the feedback coming in that regard as well as others and thank you Claire!

I might shorten the excerpt.

What do you guys think?
 


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claire
05/31/2011 17:16

The excerpt is just the right length, I think, at this
point in time. It sets the stage, is clear and is brief. Makes me want to read more,which I cannot do right now!:-(

Cliche should have ad on it. "Cliched"

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Engel
05/31/2011 17:53

Thank you so much!I'll fix that other error. Let's just consider my spelling part of the comedy! :-D

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