Oh dear, it appears that my major dramatic question here might be whether or not the protagonist gets a joke! Well, at least I have some reasonably good sub-plots. 

Also, I found a copy of "Alice’s Adventures Underground." Apparently that was Carrols original draft of "Alice In Wonderland." 

I’m excited about reading this!  

 
Okay, I changed you're to your in the excerpt. Those of you who know me know that it's a miracle that I can spell my own name...

So, keep the feedback coming in that regard as well as others and thank you Claire!

I might shorten the excerpt.

What do you guys think?
 
Thank you Amanda! 
Welcome Claudia and Kacee! 
Love, Engel